How readable it was for those whom English is their first language?.The witch and other two mortals were at (a) loss of words and just stared (at me). (I) made (my) presence known with a hiss. (I was) Covered in light speckles, brownish (color?), (a full) two meters long snake. (My now) Slender elongated shape slid over the child’s body and settled on (his) chest. My energy shaped into (a) slightly transparent body. I was nothing more then a spectator that now others could see. Even if I entered (the) mortal real(realm), I felt nothing. With my energy all collected in one place I’m (a being) less noticeable by magic users. The witch and other two mortals(,) were at (a) loss of words and just stared (at me). I was a white hen with bright yellow feet and a red crest. (In my new form i clapped my wings loudly, my body descend with might. ( It was the female, she had black hair and her skin was also a few shades darker than the man’s) Female had black hair and her skin was few shades darker than the man’s. I also noticed that one of them wasn’t native.
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